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it also gives depth to the shot and a little bit of sense of the scale of the place. David Muench would be happy with this, I think.
to spread the word, so more people can see the feature.
I just want to move nearby even if it's impossible.
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Down to brass tacks. The first thing that disrupted my eye was the inclusion of the little rock to the lower right, seems a little out of place as catches your eye as you spin out from the main subject. Was it in the frame due to the constraints of shooting from that particular spot?
The level crop makes it feel slight uncomfortable on my eye, at first I was thinking that the water needs cropping especially as a lot of the gorgeous mountain detail in the reflection is lost in shadow, however the more I look at it the more I think maybe it's fine but simply needs ever so slight dodge just to lift up the reflections.
A lot of motion on the water to the right, maybe just a pinch more exposure to let that smooth over a little more?
The mountains have a stunning orange and red hue that's just gorgeous but the foreshore and the tops are just a little too dark. The far left shore in the trees is very dark indeed. You see the image but your eye is very quickly constrained by just the central 25-30% of the image at the cliff faces, they feel slightly trapped in a lot of surrounding shadow.
Love the sky but there's a bright spot on the upper right that feels slightly at odds with the darker, richer tones in the rest of the image, it's almost an escape route to get out of the image away from the cliff faces.
A stunning, classic landscape image that's been extremely well captured but just feels a little dark in places.
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