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lomaki pueblo in wupatki national monument

these are some of the most interesting ruins i have seen and the whole park is a city of them, though they are spaced out a little.

critiques welcome :)

3 image stitch

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This is a really great pano Pete!

I'm glad you're making a print out of this, because it's really going to look fantastic matted and framed. The colors are really outstanding, and the shadow is really intriguing. The contrast is subtle, but I like it like that. It really makes you wonder what the building looked like, and shows they constructed the building out of what they had readily available.

Compositionally I like this man. At first when you look at it it doesn't appear to have much depth, but when when you view it larger you can see to the left of the ruins how vast the location really is. If you stepped back a bit you probably could have gotten a little more in front of the ruins, but that's really just nitpicking.

Processing wise, you remained subtle and not overwhelming, and I like that a lot. Your stitch of the two photos was also flawless, definitely no issues there.

Excellent job Mr. Pedro!
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PhilS1761 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Too bad so few visit this site since it is so accessible and so spectacular. If you go be sure to check out the ball court and also the natural opening that pumps cold air all day. 
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trlight Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2011
Nice job on the stiching
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PeterJCoskun Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2011
Thanks!
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cassannder Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
Hey, very cool!
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PeterJCoskun Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
Thanks!
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Elvenred Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009   Photographer
Great work! Very intriguing and attractive! :clap:
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PeterJCoskun Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009
thank you very much, its a very interesting place

thanks for the fav too!
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MarietteBerndsen Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Great picture, really love the colors in the ruins :)
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PeterJCoskun Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
thank you, after i took this the structure became bright orange almost as bright as the sun, i would have taken a photo of it but would have had to take some of the colors out anyways...it was an amazing place
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namioevangelista Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
Adorable composition!
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PeterJCoskun Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
thank you and thanks for the fav!
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namioevangelista Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009
Always welcome, my friend
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CheeseyBrie3 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009   Photographer
this is so beautiful!!! :wow:
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PeterJCoskun Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
thank you it really is a special place and the entire area is extremely beautiful, if your ever in flagstaff make sure to stop there!

also thanks for the fav!
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CheeseyBrie3 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009   Photographer
no problem.

and if i go i'll definitely stop by. :)
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PeterJCoskun Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
its worth it
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MagdaMontemor Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
Beautiful indeed. Great angle, great colours. :D
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PeterJCoskun Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
thank you and thanks for the fav!
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MagdaMontemor Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
My pleasure, believe me. :)
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lepajena Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
really awesome shot :)
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PeterJCoskun Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
thank you very much and thanks for the fav!
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StarTyger Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2009
Ahhh...
the photo is fine,
but, it is called LOmaki
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PeterJCoskun Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2009
ahh you are correct again haha, thanks for correcting me, i could have sworn it had the u on the map haha
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fubecando Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009
So, uh....its an old delapitated building...Dude we have those in my city and I don't go taking photos of them and posting them on DA.

Just playing man. I really dig this shot!
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PeterJCoskun Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009
haha i was waiting for a comment like that...and who better to say it! YOU lol

thanks man, its one of my favorites from the trip, that area is full of indian ruins
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Dani-Lefrancois Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009  Professional Photographer
ooo i like this.. you can see more of the sides!! well done!
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PeterJCoskun Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009
thank you, still couldnt get that last image in there but looking at this its not needed
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Dani-Lefrancois Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009  Professional Photographer
yah.. things seem to jump out more in this one.. the tree looks like its not attached to the building on the right now!!
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PeterJCoskun Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009
haha yeah, the other image is just more of the side so the ruins were much more centered but i can live without it...thanks for faving it :)
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Dani-Lefrancois Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009  Professional Photographer
you are welcome!! i thought i had it faved already but i didnt.. =P
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PeterJCoskun Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009
well glad you did!
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Dani-Lefrancois Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009  Professional Photographer
:lick:
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mym8rick Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009  Professional Photographer
So strikingly orange reminds me of Sedona Nation Park in the USA. really is a great image.
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PeterJCoskun Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
thank you, the town of sedona is not too far from here so you see a lot of red rocks around

also thanks for the fav!
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jayshree Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
I think you picked the angle well. The shadows are great.
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PeterJCoskun Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
thank you very much, its actually 2 photos stitched together
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jayshree Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Nice.
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FicktionPhotography Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
I love the color. These photos are exceptional lately!
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PeterJCoskun Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
thank you, i just came back from a nice trip so i have plenty more photos to post :)
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Kristafee Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Simply beautiful. It's a dream of mine to one day go to see Chaco Canyon and all the surrounding sites. This just reminds me of that dream :)
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PeterJCoskun Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
the entire park is amazing, not many people go here because its no grand canyon or yellowstone, but it takes you back in time to some of the most interesting places and artifacts from the southwest. we have a lot of indian ruins in arizona, but this was the most ive seen in one day ha

thanks for the fav as well!
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